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Blind Love

The romance between them female and male, From her dying inside from all the pain. Their love like a moon shining oh so pale, And them thinking they were going insane. From the late nights of fighting and crying, To the dates that went wrong in both their ways. They both found out of each others lying, And cheating that took place the past few days. Punching and kicking, being tossed around, The bruises, the blood, the black-and-blue eyes. She shouts and screams when she falls to the ground, The neighbors don't help when they hear her cries. But on the wedding day nothing is said, And the truth came out when they found her dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2010 8:17:00 AM
this is scary and painful..bt with God everythinghas purpose..good writing
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Date: 11/2/2010 7:26:00 PM
thanks. if there is anything i can do to make my poetry better please let me know. lots of love.
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Date: 11/2/2010 1:00:00 PM
Whoa, darkending >:) The flipside of love.. good use of negative stuff
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Date: 11/2/2010 10:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darylsue. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:50:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write today with the luv theme.. hope your time on soup will be fun.. and u will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/2/2010 5:20:00 AM
What a tragic picture you have penned of the wedding day, Darylsue
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