Blind Love

Blind Love

He saw her bangles
he heard them chime
he looked at her
but hid behind.

He glimpsed her earrings
as she danced past
he looked at her
but turned away fast.

He saw her hair
as it blew, across her face
he heard her footsteps
as she walked with grace.

He saw how she did
everything with style
how badly he wanted 
to share a smile.

The words " I love you"
were at the tip of his tongue
but he was shy
he was afraid, he'd be turned down.

So he looked at her once more
then, sadly he turned away
not knowing
for him, she felt the same way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/2/2009 9:09:00 AM
This is really great Maryam..some people are really blind when it comes to love..either that or they deny it because they're scared. thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem :) Love Always, Serenity
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Date: 1/29/2009 3:03:00 PM
Very sweet, penned with a very nice flow of rythm, and rhyme... So tenderly shy and yet so powerfully expressed.... Bonnie Thank you for your comment...
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:29:00 PM
oops "he was afraid she'd run" Debbie
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:28:00 PM
"he was afraid, she's run." Excellent Maryam the best one of yours I read yet!!! Very very good! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/28/2009 9:13:00 AM
Aww, I like this one a lot Maryam! Made me smile, and think of the truth of it all. Great write! ~Jen~
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Date: 1/27/2009 11:40:00 PM
Smile-I loved this vivid and image filled write of Yours dear lady! It held a soft tenderness about it-which I would say, would be but a reflection of "Your Heart" I believe--And I could see You within its setting-music, dance floor, vibrant crowd and reflective lights aglow? Smile-And You looked so lovely it seemed! Very pretty write Maryam!!!-"Warmth and Love To You Always, John!"-Bye Dear Lady!:)
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:31:00 PM
Maryam, this is so sweet and tender and sadly how it happens sometimes. Your wrte about it is perfect in the sentiment and form. Great job! Love, Robin.
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