Blind Faith

Fate casts out its crumbs

a mixture of stale and fresh

for its hungry birds-

We blindly eat our fair share

and hope for good digestion.


November 5, 2022

Contest- A New Hiku Footle Tanka
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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November 10, 2022 at 7:00 AM
Clever Sandra. Congratulations your win! :)
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November 8, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Creative work you have penned in this winner for Brian's contest. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara
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November 5, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Amen, the is great , love it, so much to gain from it
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