Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Epigram

Blind and Deaf

BLIND AND DEAF


Blind and deaf would 
I be
Without your presence,
In perpetual darkness
In silence eternal,
Ignorant of light
Oblivious to sound
Alien to happiness
Forever! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
      25 MAY 2013

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Donna Jones May 25, 2013 at 9:24 PM Ahhh you've found your soul mate! Lucky indeed! Wonderful... Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 11:37 PM It seems so, Donna! Thank you for your comment!

Seren Roberts May 25, 2013 at 9:14 PM Loved it Demetrios ....Seren Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 11:36 PM Thank you for your visit, Seren!

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2013 at 4:58 PM a dreamy kind of love that knows no weaknesses.. powerfully quilled!..:) huggs Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 5:02 PM Thank you Nette! Nice of you to visit! Thank for the hugs too!

Sara Kendrick May 25, 2013 at 3:35 PM Very expressive work.I can feel the emotion from the work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visit to my work.Sara Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 3:38 PM Thank you my dear Sara! Very gracious of you to visit!

Shadow Hamilton May 25, 2013 at 1:11 PM a lot of truth here, good write. Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 3:19 PM Thank you Linda! So kind of you to visit!

Manel Gunatillake May 25, 2013 at 10:36 AM 7 should be. Sorrowful note in the last line. "Alien to happiness Forever" Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 3:21 PM My dear Manel, I am by nature very optimistic! Here I wish to stress how important she is to my happiness! Thank you so much. You are both kind and generous!

Christine Phillips May 25, 2013 at 7:36 AM Hi Demetrios, Are you missing me...?(LOL) very nice radiant poem. Full of emotional depth. Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 7:44 AM Who wouldn't? Thank you for your comment, you kind!

Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 3:33 AM OXI! Be it far from you. Lovely write, as usual! What depth of words and strength of emotions my dear poet. You astound. :) Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 4:48 AM Is the inspiration my dear Eileen! The muse whispers the words and I just write them down!