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Blessedville Orphanage Fairy Tale

There resided in an Orphanage, called Blessedville Lovely girls whose names are Charitybelle, Faithgayle and Hopedelle. They are best friends and in prayer they are aligned Asking God to give them adoptive parents who are kind… Yet they must wait for guardians with good heart and mind. One day, their home was visited by Mr. and Mrs. Kompassion Giving all children food supplies, and for each one, a school-provision As they announced their adoption-related decision. They planned to adopt two girls who are cheerful So all children have become more responsible and dutiful Including Charitybelle, Faithgayle and Hopedelle who are hopeful. “We want all of you to be part of our choice” Said Mrs. Grace Kompassion, “so now rejoice And answer our question without making a noise.” Mr. Merc Kompassion smiled with delight Stating, “Just do what is right and write without fright To make us know that you are the great child in our sight.” Mr. and Mrs. Kompassion asked each child for recommendation: “Among all of you, what two names can you give as suggestion To be included for our family expansion?” Each child wrote one person including own name But not Charitybelle, Faithgayle and Hopedelle who are the same In not placing their names for their full claim. Charitybelle considered Faithgayle and Hopedelle for the best Faithgayle mentioned Hopedelee and Charitybelle to be blest While Hopedelle noted that Charitybelle and Faithgayle are the greatest. Because of the love* they showed for each other Charitybelle, Faithgayle and Hopedelle were adopted together And Mr. and Mrs. Kompassion became their father and mother. Until now, they visit Blessedville Orphanage with eagerness Expressing that they thank the Lord for His graciousness Making them belong to a wondrous family of joyfulness.
*1John 4:16 And we have known and believed the love that God hath to us. God is love; and he that dwelleth in love dwelleth in God, and God in him. Tristich in Rhyme midst Narrative form April 7, 2023 1st place, "Write a Sweet Fairytale For Children with a Good Outcome Ending; Nobody gets hurt" Poetry Writing Contest; Sponsored by BJ Legros Kelley; judged on 5/6/2023.

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Date: 5/7/2023 2:05:00 PM
This is beautiful, Beata, so kind and sweet. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/7/2023 4:24:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations. I just adore this one, sweet lady. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/6/2023 10:39:00 PM
Nice tale Kabayan... Congratulations...
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Date: 5/6/2023 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Beata! Thank you for entering your wonderful poem which was presented in such a nice and neat format! :) <3
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