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Bewildered by cacophonic sounds of mind, I chose to step outside the stream of thought flow into the vast void, leaving desires behind and as I did this, my heart became mellow, outpouring compassion beauteous and kind, inking the universe with a mystic glow, whereupon melding thus with the all that is, my heart began dispersing mists of pure bliss. God’s grace is immediate and intimate and in truth there is nothing we need to do, save gentling heart and making thought flow sedate, that His bountiful benedictions renew, whence heart celebrates as in-form nodes gyrate, releasing nectar like the fresh morning dew and thus this is-ness of being-ness of soul, are divine blessings, ancient scriptures extol. 29-January-2023 HMS, Rhymezone, PS Grammar Writing Challenge - B Word Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:58:00 AM
Seeker, a beautiful poem of faith, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Date: 2/5/2023 12:31:00 AM
Thank you, Constance :)
Date: 2/2/2023 7:49:00 PM
Lovely poetry in Ottava rima form. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 2/2/2023 7:58:00 PM
Thank you, Belle
Date: 2/1/2023 1:59:00 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Sara
Date: 2/1/2023 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 2/1/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you!

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