Vladislav Raven Poet Sonnet

Blessed Rose

Oh~blessed rose~you grow within my heart,
how bright the light that shines with love's glory,
from thy wondrous glory~never to part,
blessed rose~you are my own love story.

What glory divine~my eyes ever see,
when my eyes do look upon your dear grace,
my most blessed rose you shall ever be,
as I hold you within a lover's embrace.

Come to me now on the breath of a sigh,
my blessed rose~breathe now into my soul,
before us, there shall never be a goodbye,
the love in our hearts, we shall ever control.

From soul to soul we never come to part,
oh~blessed rose~you grow within my heart.

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Harry Horsman July 28, 2022 at 11:21 PM What an amazing sonnet this is, Mike, Yes the Rose is so special, and you've just made it more so. Harry. Vladislav Raven July 30, 2022 at 12:13 PM Hi Harry, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The rose ever sings in the heart, its song is ever a joy to behold. May the rose ever sing in my heart and bring me joy and peace. Have a wonderful Sunday ..... Mike.

Robert Lindley July 21, 2022 at 1:33 AM ""Come to me now on the breath of a sigh, my blessed rose~breathe now into my soul, before us, there shall never be a goodbye, the love in our hearts, we shall ever control"" Mike, your poem is truly a romantic jewel. Imagery, depth, message, romanticism - all are tops by this old poet's judgement. A gem and a fav.... Vladislav Raven July 21, 2022 at 9:00 AM Hi Robert, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so happy that you liked the piece. The blessed rose is held within the chambers of my heart, an eternal rose. I so love writing romance, as you know. Thank you so much for the fave, my friend. Your friend always ..... Mike.

Ann Foster July 20, 2022 at 7:52 AM Sweetly written... like a soft love song, heard by those that can hear... the heart beats with their own hearts... Ann Vladislav Raven July 20, 2022 at 7:59 AM Hi Ann, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. Love sung gently to a blessed rose that lives deep within a scene of love, within the mind. I do love doing these kinds of write. Hugs always ..... Mike.

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2022 at 10:51 PM I really love it that we may press our most beautiful rose between the pages of a book to keep always too. I have a rose bud pressed from over 60 years ago. Your sonnet is exceptional Mike. It is so wonderful to have you back with us. Keep well. Hugs and Blessings xxoo Vladislav Raven July 20, 2022 at 7:26 AM Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is always appreciated. The rose is something we always wish to keep for as long as we can. I keep my roses pressed within the chambers of my mind. It is good to be back Connie. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Victor Buhagiar July 19, 2022 at 10:00 PM Who doesn't love a rose? It's been a long time since I heard from you. Hope all is well, Victor Vladislav Raven July 20, 2022 at 7:10 AM Hi Victor, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is always appreciated. I am sorry I have been away for so long, I had a few health problems but am doing well now. I hope I find you well, my friend ..... Mike.

Mystic Rose Rose July 19, 2022 at 12:23 PM What a beautiful poem, its so nice to hear from you again. Hope all is good Vie Vladislav Raven July 19, 2022 at 12:53 PM Hi Vienna, it is good to be back. I have had my problems over the past couple of years, they stopped me from coming on, but as you see, I am back, doing the same as I always did. I am glad you liked the piece. Hope you are well, Vienna. Hugs always ..... Mike.