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Blessed Rain

How refreshing is the rush of rain on this melancholy, Monday morn! Pungent scents ruminate in the air creating a connection with nature a feeling of vibrancy, a cleansing. A fresh strumming of raindrops fall recklessly in fits and starts, I am alert to nature's sounds and dramatic sights. Moody clouds lighten and darken a daring drama unfolds in the skies as I watch inside my comfortable cocoon. Heaven sheds it's torrents of tears splashing ever downward, falling pounding rooftops, sputtering through gutters, flooding over sidewalks and streets. Watery rivulets stream down my window in crazy patterns, splattering the sill. Liquid rivers busily form from humble puddles flowing ever onward, swelling the ground with rainwater, a precious commodity. Rich rain, a wellspring of life, falls freely soaking into the thirsty ground, replenishing spreading it's wet richness to roots and plants, trees and flowers. A farmer's precious treasure is the rain and a blessing to every creature that moves and lives upon the earth beneath. Written on 2/19/2018

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Date: 2/24/2018 6:59:00 PM
Back with congrats on your most deserving win. Well done, Laura.
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Date: 2/24/2018 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win for the Blessed Rain, a beautiful poem ....
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Date: 2/23/2018 5:05:00 PM
Returning with congrats Laura on your win.
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Blessed rain" win, Laura :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:02:00 AM
lovely lines Laura and great imagery.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/23/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Silent, for my placement in your contest! I'm glad you liked this one :)
Date: 2/21/2018 6:32:00 PM
You have a winner here, Laura - I expect to see it at the top of the winners list! Thx for taking time to read the tribute to Billy Graham. There will probably never be another like him. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/23/2018 10:36:00 AM
I also wrote a poem about Billy Graham on the day he died. It's titled "A Tribute". Hope you have a chance to read it. God bless :)
Date: 2/20/2018 8:47:00 PM
A lovely tribute to the blessing that is rain. Well done, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/21/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Line :)
Date: 2/20/2018 3:24:00 PM
wow, a real godsend of rain AND imagery. Great description in your poem here, Laura. A sure winner!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/21/2018 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm happy you liked my poem :)
Date: 2/20/2018 7:08:00 AM
lovely description ... well expressed emotions ... a pleasure to go through ...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/20/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Probir :P
Date: 2/19/2018 7:42:00 PM
Lovely imagery of rain and the scenic sky. A well written depiction of how it supports life..well written..best for a win Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/20/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay :)

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