Blessed Rain

How refreshing is the rush of rain
on this melancholy, Monday morn!
Pungent scents ruminate in the air
creating a connection with nature
a feeling of vibrancy, a cleansing.

A fresh strumming of raindrops fall
recklessly in fits and starts, I am alert
to nature's sounds and dramatic sights.
Moody clouds lighten and darken 
a  daring drama unfolds in the skies
as I watch inside my comfortable cocoon.

Heaven sheds it's torrents of tears
splashing ever downward, falling
pounding rooftops, sputtering through 
gutters, flooding over sidewalks and streets.
Watery rivulets stream down my window
in crazy patterns, splattering the sill.

Liquid rivers busily form from humble puddles
flowing ever onward, swelling the ground
with rainwater, a precious commodity.
 
Rich rain, a wellspring of life, falls freely
soaking into the thirsty ground, replenishing
spreading it's wet richness 
to roots and plants, trees and flowers.
A farmer's precious treasure is the rain
and a blessing to every creature 
that moves and lives upon the earth beneath. 



Written on 2/19/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:59 PM
Back with congrats on your most deserving win. Well done, Laura.
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win for the Blessed Rain, a beautiful poem ....
Pandit Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Returning with congrats Laura on your win.
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:21 AM
- Congratulations on your "Blessed rain" win, Laura :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:02 AM
lovely lines Laura and great imagery.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Thank you, Silent, for my placement in your contest! I'm glad you liked this one :)
Hinshaw Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 6:32 PM
You have a winner here, Laura - I expect to see it at the top of the winners list! Thx for taking time to read the tribute to Billy Graham. There will probably never be another like him. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:36 AM
I also wrote a poem about Billy Graham on the day he died. It's titled "A Tribute". Hope you have a chance to read it. God bless :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 8:47 PM
A lovely tribute to the blessing that is rain. Well done, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Thanks, Line :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:24 PM
wow, a real godsend of rain AND imagery. Great description in your poem here, Laura. A sure winner!
Leiser Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm happy you liked my poem :)
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:08 AM
lovely description ... well expressed emotions ... a pleasure to go through ...
Leiser Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, Probir :P
Pandit Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:42 PM
Lovely imagery of rain and the scenic sky. A well written depiction of how it supports life..well written..best for a win Laura.
Leiser Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Thanks, Vijay :)
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