Blessed Quietness, What

this quietness i have presently
it's not a form of deafness
an absence of sound all around
everything quiet not a sound
silence a hum no beat of a drum
no bumps or squeaks no vibrations
stillness unmoved music ungrooved
this nothingness created by sound
it's lights darkness and scentless air
it's reaching to feel yet nothing is there
a tasteless void that leaves me annoid
an empty barren collection of sences
living alone i don't hear a phone
or answer friendly letters
nobody calls or cares if i fall
and find that my heart has been shattered
this numbing void was hard to avoid
it came little by little each day
what ever happened i don't know
just one by one noises went away
i long to hear the screams of children
i moved so far away from
i miss the shouting of restless teens
that misguided generation
i wish for once i'd married
when i had the chance
my long long search for peace and quiet
has come to a terrible end
if i could do it all again
and have just one more chance
id cherish all the noises
and would have kept one good friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/6/2011 11:13:00 AM
Many congratulations John, on your win in Paula's contest >> James
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Date: 1/5/2011 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John iii in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 7:43:00 AM
A beautiful write John.. Congratulations to you on your success in the contest ;-)
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:41:00 AM
John, Thank you for commenting on my haiku, I am no expert, just trying to put the words together and enjoying it. This is a beautiful poem on silence, wonderfully crafted, well done!
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:41:00 PM
An amazing write dear John. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest, John! Always, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations john on your well deserved win!
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Date: 1/2/2011 2:42:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, john
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:00:00 PM
It was great talking to you today, John, and I'm so pleased to see your poem in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:21:00 PM
I wonder if every hermit does not find the silence to loud to bear in the end. Great poem John. Congratulations. Love, Joye
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:29:00 PM
Congrats John on your winning poem in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. enjoy with luv this first day of 2011...
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Date: 1/1/2011 11:38:00 AM
Good one for the entry in the contest..Good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work delighted my spirit.I have heard of the Red Cardinals ball team but I don't even know what sport that they play..Sara
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:52:00 AM
So profound, so beautiful. My words cannot express the way this has made me feel. I will call instead. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 2:42:00 AM
i wish you great pomises bestowed, jonh.. a very touching piece.. beautiful!!
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Date: 12/31/2010 4:30:00 PM
quietness can be an everlasting peace.. if thats how you want it to be. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/31/2010 9:32:00 AM
they say be careful what you wish for because there are two sides to every story. John from my heart to yours I wish you happiness, love and joy for the NEW YEAR . Have a great evening and will talk to you in the new year. God bless you friend. Phyl
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:11:00 PM
Mighty deep John, missing U 2day,,, how R U.. I had such a long day... I need what you are blessed with,, and i don't mean it in a bad way... always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/29/2010 4:20:00 PM
this silence is deafening...be careful what you wish for...
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Date: 12/29/2010 12:54:00 PM
I am wowed by this instrospective piece, John. Good luck in the contest even though I feel it's already a winner! Knowing this Christmas must have been hard, my prayers and God's blessings remain with you always. May 2011 bring you much peace, joy and happiness. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/29/2010 12:18:00 PM
There are two sides to what we wish for and what we may regret..... said so well in your poem, John! Introspective and thoughtful! Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie
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