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*Image of Achieve Your Day by Pixabay. Blessed Moments As night sleeps gold streaks undisturbedly passive wake An accordion of yellow feathers flutters dealt reflectively Breathless swallows delight as robins and wrens chorale A predawn daystar orchestrates to a climbing crescendo Anointing a blessed living world of a sacrosanct promise Openers aimed buds to blossom amid a trail of rainbows Revitalized by a predawn splashing of persevering dews An array of augmenting colors gifting aura infused drifts Lush verdancy sprawls into a meadow's margining a lea Eucalyptus trees edge a country path curiosity satisfies Inquisitive eyes passing glance in unpretentious regard Countenance lavishly smiles into pleasurable exchange A solar star danced into a zenith reach steadies a noon Lunch crowds seal the opened sidewalk cafes parasols Casual discourse with the usual peals of warm laughter After hours armed-held couples dazzles an empty park Gatherings command a garden gazebo as a band plays A cue of kids bid a hotdog stand and an ice cream cart A fatigued sun blinks dealt an oranged squirt fan skies Napped kids held, couples snuggle, and pets tethered The undressed star unsettled by lunas spotlight hides Town mulls the well-dressed candlelit ambiance mass As dotted home lights flicker off to aglowed fireplaces Lunar star promptly enters a zenith reach into twilight. 2022 February 24 *2nd Place* A Lovely Day ~~BJ Legros Kelley: Judged 2022 March 02

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Date: 3/2/2022 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations Hilo on the high placing win of your beautiful poem! <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/2/2022 2:22:00 PM
I'm blessed re, BJo, Aloha~William
Date: 2/25/2022 6:34:00 AM
From pre-dawn to late sunset, the whole of your beautiful day is vibrant with life and variety ! Lofty diction unlike the simple poems of many of us ! Win big dear friend
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2022 12:51:00 PM
I'm grateful once again for your highlights, Valsa, as my trail of metaphors, natural's around human events that are mostly shared amongst the masses, my friend, Aloha~William!
Date: 2/25/2022 4:50:00 AM
Much vibrancy to your lovely day, William. Great exuberance you convey through your words. I have to pause and think for both you and Lassad adopted new names.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2022 9:17:00 AM
You're right! Vijay, we both changed with mines reflecting my hometown, whereto, fellow poetess Connie Marcum Wong can identify being a resident of the islands. I'm uncertain about Lasaad's referencing, hope to ask him soon, Aloha!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2022 6:07:00 AM
I corrected my error--William!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2022 5:25:00 AM
The writing was on the walls, methinks deservingly so, Vijay, touche my friend, and my appreciation nonetheless, Aloha~William!