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BLESSED

It was a bright summer day In a green glen far away. There among the tall yellow wild flowers You had come my way on a tall brown bay. You were on a quest and the day was blessed. I felt my heart skip a beat and my cheeks were flushed as I blushed. Suddenly a cool breeze blew and I knew when you bowed low God had blown me to you. And as sunbeams shone through trees the day was blessed. You, my warrior; me, your queen. There was no one in between. You found me there in that pastoral scene. You conquered my heart, my body and soul. You became my king and the day was blessed. Now here on this moonlit night Once again, my heart takes flight. Beside the campfire in this magical place You kiss my lips, I touch your handsome face. On this sacred ground we’ll rest in peace And be forever blessed. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 3/27/2018 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 5/5/2018 12:09:00 AM
oh it looks like you won from congrats I am seeing below. I really hoped you would. Congrats to you, Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 5/6/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 4/15/2018 11:19:00 AM
Simply beautiful Carole, I can see why you won the contest. You'd have won in my contest as well. Congrats on your win.....Charlie
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/15/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. You are very kind. Carole :D
Date: 4/9/2018 8:22:00 AM
Beautiful, Carole. Congrats on your win.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/9/2018 9:08:00 PM
Thanks, Line. Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/7/2018 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful romantic poem!
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/7/2018 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I'm so glad you liked "Blessed". Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/6/2018 1:08:00 AM
An excellent romantic delight Carole. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/6/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. I'm so glad you liked "Blessed". Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/5/2018 5:18:00 PM
Excellent write, Carole.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/5/2018 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/5/2018 3:46:00 PM
A lovely, romantic write, Carole. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/5/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/5/2018 12:18:00 PM
You paint a picture with words letting us feel them as well as hear them...this is hard to accomplish and you done it well. Emile.
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/5/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment, Emile, and for my placement in the contest. Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/4/2018 4:11:00 AM
Sorry for not being around for a while, Carole. But I'm glad I dropped by to read this gem of a poem. Beautifully written. A fave for me. T.J
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/4/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thank you, Teppo. I'm glad you are back and thank you for the fave. Carole Duet :D
Date: 4/3/2018 6:24:00 PM
Very beautiful my dear... You're so lucky to have your king...long live the queen.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/7/2018 11:36:00 PM
What is Real my dear Carole and what is Fantasy? Certain chemicals that stimulate our neurotransmitters.....
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Carole Duet
Date: 4/4/2018 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Pashan g, but it is pure fantasy. No king or queen. They exist totally in my imagination.
Date: 4/3/2018 7:11:00 AM
Very romantic and dreamy poem, Carole. Love this line ... You, my warrior; me, your queen. There was no one in between. You found me there in that pastoral scene. Lovely poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 3/31/2018 9:26:00 PM
A very lovely, charming romantic write Carole; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 3/30/2018 7:40:00 PM
gosh, I will be very surprised if Emile is not impressed by this sweet romantic write, Carole. Good luck in the contest.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/31/2018 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope so! :D
Date: 3/30/2018 4:25:00 PM
such a sweet romantic write Carole, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/31/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I do love "romance".
Date: 3/29/2018 12:19:00 PM
Such a lovely write Carol, well done and best wishes in the contest...
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/29/2018 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, and thank you for reading. Carole :D
Date: 3/28/2018 10:42:00 PM
Love is a main ingredient of inspiration, and I like where this theme took you Carole. Your poetic artistry of words and lines coming together beautifully and eloquently with just the right touch of 'old world charm' to it, ending on a beautiful note. A winning entry, not that you need it but good luck in the contest. This is definitely a fave...Maria xxx
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/29/2018 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Maria. Carole :D
Date: 3/28/2018 7:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this sweet story of romance..soothing flow and words..best for a win, Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/29/2018 1:41:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. Carole :D
Date: 3/28/2018 6:30:00 AM
Lovely imagery and flow in your poem, such a profound ending...
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/29/2018 1:35:00 AM
I'm so glad you "got" the ending ZZ. I love a surprise ending. Thanks for your comment. Carole :D
Date: 3/27/2018 10:20:00 PM
Breathtaking creativity.. Stellar writing Carole! All the best to you!!
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/29/2018 1:48:00 AM
Geeezz! What a lovely comment, Robertina. Thank you and thank you for reading. Carole Duet :D