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picture of great-grandmother - eyes of an old woman - JPG picture of grandmothers hands - Hands of an elderly senior holding the hand of a younger woman - JPG

- Bless Your Breath -

A wonderful grandmother
She smiled because she had lived
Taught me about life and love
Her silver hair revealed years she had seen
Children, grandchildren and great-grandchildren
A long life of sunshine, joy, pain and tears
Nothing came easy in her life
Grandma's hands bent and swollen by arthritis
Bless your breath from this life
I can always see you in my memory







(Dagny Johanna Gismervik - died 16/12/2002 - 89 years)

21.02.2016
A-L Andresen :)
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Bogan Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 1:50 PM
I like your poem "Bless your Breath" So real but oh so true. This poem reminds me of my grandmother who lived to be 82 years old. Keep up the great work!!! *** Blessedchild***
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 1:55 PM
- My memories ............. becomes your memories ... it's nice, Keandra :) - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 7:54 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:02 AM
- Glad you enjoy my grandmother write, Funom :) - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Whatley Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Excellent topic, very intimately conveyed. Pleasure to read, Anne.
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:05 AM
- Michael, glad you enjoy my grandmother write - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Smart write dear one; sensing value of memories, all is never lost.
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:04 AM
- I am grateful for your visit and comments, thanks Iris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Dear Anne Lise HUGS AND LOVING LIGHT FOR THIS BEAUTY, my friend love it so much read it three times, what awesome pictures such a wonderful combo here, loved it totally, cheri
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 2:05 AM
- Dear Cherl, glad you enjoy my grandmother write - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:45 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 11:38 AM
- I am grateful for your visit and comments, thanks Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Knuuttila Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Beautiful love :)
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:19 AM
- Thanks for visit and comments, Stephanie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Very heart-felt, dear Anne Lise. My grandmother was my life's precious blessing. I feel her presence in my life everyday. Elaine
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 2:05 PM
- Elaine, glad you enjoy my grandmother write - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tudor Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:36 AM
I was raised by my Grandmother. This is a wonderful tribute to yours, you have made her proud, I have no doubt.
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 2:04 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful comments, J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Wonderful remembrances penned here, Anne Lise :) I love and miss my Grandma, and this reminded me of her!
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 2:03 PM
- Laura, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM
ohh, i remember my grandma who lived till she was 100 years old... so heartwarming and splendid, anne.. happy huggs!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:12 PM
- So amazing 100 years, Nette - Hope she had a good health and be able to enjoy her old age - Thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Beautiful pen Anne-Lise!Beautifully painted tribute to your grandma dear friend.Very sweet!A7!Sending you love and prayers.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)Hugs!D
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:50 PM
- My grandmother had a lot of pain because of her arthritis - She always said: "Health is better than wealth, always remember that "- Thanks for reading my grandmother poem, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 22, 2016 at 12:24 PM
A beautiful blessed breath of love...great verse...god bless your grandma and you...my grandma was 78 when she passed my grandpa was 95...but I still cried like a baby...with admiration...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:33 PM
- Grandma and Grandpa hold our small hands for just a little while, but lives in our hearts the rest of our life Winged :) - Thanks for the beautiful comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hardison Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Grand tribute to Grandmother. So often taken for granted until passing. Peace, Love and Joy.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:38 PM
- A grandmother we just borrow for a small part of our lives, John :) - I am grateful for your visit and comments, thanks - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 22, 2016 at 12:07 PM
A beautiful dedication to grandmother, beautifully crafted. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:39 PM
- My friend Bl, glad you enjoy my grandmother write - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 22, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Enjoyed reading your work honoring your grandmother..I did not get to experience the love of a grandmother but hope that my love for my grandsons always uplifts and affirms them in all the good aspects of their life..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 12:14 PM
- Dear Sara, a grandmother is a bit parent, a good teacher, never run out of hugs or cookies and is always your best friend :) - Thanks for the beautiful comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 22, 2016 at 5:04 AM
Great tribute to ur grandma Anne Lise... a seven.. thnx for ur kind visit to my page!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:21 AM
- A lovely grandma painful to lose, she lives in my heart - Thanks for the beautiful comments and a 7, Dr. Upma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:27 AM
I am back after long vacation. Enjoyed myself.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 4:17 AM
- Hope your vacation was relaxed and beautiful - Welcome back my friend Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:25 AM
Excellent tribute to your grandma. Grandparents are always precious and pillars of the house. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 4:19 AM
- Nice to see you back Ravi, thanks for the beautiful comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Grandparents are precious stones that the passing of time doesn't dim their shine! Wonderful thought and beautiful writing, a real tribute to those who have shaped our lives, dear Anne-Lise! Much enjoyed! A seven.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 4:11 AM
- Always the memories in my heart - Thank you for your beautiful words and a 7, dear friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hunjeri Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 5:37 PM
A great tribute to your grandmother Anne Lise. Such a great title followed by very beautiful words. 7+
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 4:08 AM
- Njeri, glad you enjoy my grandmother write - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 4:43 PM
"Bless your breath from this life." What a georgous line. From a lovely poem.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 4:06 AM
- Jean, thanks for reading my grandmother poem - always nice to receive positive comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Such a beautiful tribute Anne Lise I never knew either of my grandmothers but mum still talks about 'mummy' who died when mum was only 8:-( hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:38 PM
I had a 'step step' grandmother as her father re married twice, the second wife also dying... but 'grandma' was not a real grandma and we rarely saw her and I never had a bond with her:-( hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 2:37 PM
- Never a grandmother hug when you were little, so sad Jan -Thank you for reading about my grandmother - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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