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Bless the Beasts

on that holy night at the stable Mary Babe Joseph three wise men shepherds having left their flocks from miles around ANIMALS ...................................................................... Merry Christmas all

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Date: 10/21/2015 7:35:00 PM
Hello Daver, a soothing piece for me to read, I chose it from its title; and yet we are not far from His recognition time..' God Bless..'
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Date: 3/4/2010 9:43:00 PM
I most enjoy reading this excellent piece of work . Thanks for your second comment on ''ants''......KEEP THE GOOD TANKA POETRY COMMING....
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Date: 1/15/2010 11:00:00 AM
A rating of 7 ain't high enough! This deserves at least a ten! An excellent Christmas tanka. Thanks for sharing!---Milt
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Date: 12/25/2009 11:36:00 AM
Never wrote a tanka, but this is cute! Merry Christmas! andrea
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Date: 12/24/2009 11:50:00 AM
Very nice, Daver.
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Date: 12/23/2009 5:42:00 PM
Bless the beasts indeed,,Daver. Thank you for your apparently well qualified remark on Retired Romance! : ) -Robert
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Date: 12/23/2009 10:42:00 AM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/22/2009 4:33:00 PM
Merry Christmas to you to Daver! You have me smiling. What can be better for the season. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 12/22/2009 1:34:00 PM
You crack me up, Daver....I needed that. Best Christmas present so far. I love animals! That painted such a vivid picture in my mind and I can't get it out. Can't stop laughing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/22/2009 12:26:00 PM
I Love this Daver. The really Good life, I believe, only begins after we meet the Maker. However, I am convienced we can meet Him to a large degree, while here, improving our lives by his workable system of Love, itself. Thanks so much for coming aboard, I look forward to working together. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/21/2009 6:11:00 AM
Thanks and thanks again, may your loving soul be richly bless and filled with Christmas cheer.
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Date: 12/20/2009 5:17:00 PM
LOL -- I love the "BIG GRUMPY" fella! Just read your message. Thanks, my dear.
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:58:00 PM
Wonderful Tanka, Daver. Thank you for sharing this with us this Holy Season. A blessed Merry Christmas to you too! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/19/2009 7:43:00 PM
yes, I too love my Mom's ancient Nativity Scene she lovingly puts on display each Xmas.... new pieces come and go... one year we couldn't find Baby Jesus! boy oh boy! talk about a frenzy! one of the littles had been playing with Him and we found Him tucked away peacefully with the other toys! thanks Daver! much fun! and thanks for your comments! jimbo
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Date: 12/19/2009 6:21:00 PM
Love this quite charming poem for Christmas, dear Daver. You do make me smile! Merry Christmas to you too! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/19/2009 6:06:00 PM
smile..you know I thought from your verses you were in your 20's..really! Young at heart! Light & love
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:21:00 AM
Yes, the beasts are an important part, too. Very wise to tribute them. Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:14:00 AM
My nativity scene would not be complete without the Wise Men's camels, the shepherd's sheep and the manger's donkey. The "beasts" were blessed to be part of one of the greatest events to influence our world, Daver. This is a blessed write and I wish you a very Merry Christmas! Much love, Carolyn
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