Bless Me

My girlfriend made her bikini out of large farmer handkerchiefs, She tied them tight with all her might hoping never to debrief. A triangle here tied to a triangle there is all that keeps her covered, And she looks so cute in her swimsuit that close to her I hovered. I don’t have a cold this summer but I spend time praying for a sneeze, So I can eye her while I enquire, may I borrow a handkerchief please?

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John Smith

Date: 8/18/2011 8:29:00 AM

Ah...AH KACHOO!! Sorry...did I do that to you? My, my...what a view! Love your poem. It covers so much with so little.

Theresa T

Date: 8/18/2011 8:04:00 AM

I wondered how it would end, cute. I like that the title ties in so nicely to your poem. Titles are so important.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2011 7:21:00 AM

Thank you for posting your most interesting poetry that we all might enjoy reading it Tony. I wish you a wonderful day full of love, good health and much inspiration. Love, Carol