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Blending Tears

The breeze from the ceiling fan circles my thoughts... With two forks in the road no turns would be fought... I stayed straight as possible, but some fruit I had to taste... Some scars stay unhealed and small tears fell without haste... With no mirror to see behind, forward is my ony way to fly... Onto a place in my soul where I never question the why's... Where I can sit and write without any left over fears... From of palet of colors I blend with my tears...

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/1/2012 10:16:00 AM

As usual, your title caught me and you end it perfectly, dear.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2012 10:43:00 AM

a beautiful expression of innermost precious thoughts Michael luv ..another genuine Michawel masterpiece ..JG.. so luvs.. xoxo

Elizabeth Bark

Date: 7/9/2012 8:18:00 PM

wow michael, you have truely done a wonder with this one, its so lovely. and what a way to thinkabout things, blending a pallet with your tears, even though i hate so hear about you crying, it makes for a great poem. love you bunches :) lizzie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2012 6:51:00 PM

Hi, once again, i can feel the cyclone of thoughts rushing over your head. sometimes we live in regrets, but we must live without looking back... this is what happens when all emotions collide together... great one... xox~love PD

Elena De'Orio

Date: 7/8/2012 6:39:00 PM

amazing, as always!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/8/2012 11:37:00 AM

Good to read your new poems - this reveals more on a second reading. Profound truths are often like that. Welcome back.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/8/2012 11:30:00 AM

This is quite a wondrous write my friend! What a delightful poem, full of meaning and wisdom! I enjoyed the feel that you portrayed within your piece! Great Work!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/8/2012 9:58:00 AM

The things of the past all help to make us who we are today.. I always think if that didn't happen I might not be doing this etc.. So even with all those unhealed scars, we still move forward cause it's the only thing that makes perfect sense. I enjoyed this thought provoking write MJF.. Continue to write I say ;) love CTH

Wilma Neels
Date: 7/8/2012 10:22:00 AM

See I have my moments of wisdom :) jk luv xoxox

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 7/8/2012 10:17:00 AM

So true my Muse... without the scars and stumbles there wouldnt be me... luv right back to you CTH....xoox