Blending In Tango

strongly believe
with what you said
very confident
with what you felt

it is a perfect expression
the pure glow 
of a sincere heart

there is a love

no doubt
love in your eyes
love in your thoughts
full in a dream 

there is a love

I guess that love 
is a tango
have to careful alignment 
needs a chemistry 
the unity
blending in tango 

if my love could choose 
as what my wish 
if my love could select
like selecting a menu
if my love could pointed at anyone

will not hesitate 
to choose you

but love is a tango
and it takes two to tango

i still don’t feel the tango
tango in the moon
tango in the dreams 

~ (c)Sukmawati komala ~ 
23 February 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/5/2013 9:57:00 PM
The repetition of 'there is a love" is very effective and powerful in this poem. Very nicely done, Sukmawati.
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Date: 3/1/2013 7:41:00 PM
Very beautiful Suki, you capture the feelings of passion in the beat of the music that translates into feeling. Very emotional, Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 2/25/2013 8:21:00 PM
Dramatic love monologue, very awesome. I read the second verse four times....it is nice to contemplate your words. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 2/25/2013 1:18:00 AM
Sukmawati I love this very romantic write it just flows off the tongue, well done...David
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