Bleed'N Ink

bleed'n ink
like a river 
slithering 
around mountains
through valleys
and over cliffs
gushing out
falling free
all the ink 
that's in me
I urge 
to bleed 
personal possessive pronouns
in front of your name
and every endearment
personal possessive pronoun this
personal possessive pronoun that
personal possessive pronoun sweet...
personal possessive pronoun dear...
they all roll right off my keyboard
but they mean nothing
unless rolled right off my tongue
you aren't personal possessive pronoun
anything--yet
and I've hemorrhaged 
a blood bank
over you
... yeah
true...
you've spilled vast quantities
over me, too
quite the ink bath
we're wading through
but 
no personal possessive pronouns
start using them on me
I'll start using them on you
next thing you know 
I'm on flights
with stuffed bunnies, 
roses, chocolates, and daisies
believing in
happily ever after
so... no 
personal possessive pronouns
not until we have
no more ink to bleed
but, oh, 
how I want you 
to be....

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Date: 12/7/2022 5:45:00 AM
Hey Steven. I like this one too. Very cleverly written verse. BTW, what happened to your "Soup Drama" poem?
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Date: 12/7/2022 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. I thought better of soup drama. I don't like it, but it's not mine. I'd be drawing attention to ugliness I wish would just go away.
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