Bleaks Abyss

Bleak
my life
endless strife
to where, darkness
consumed by an abyss so delightful

I now fall, in entering, smiling I
appease echoes
resonates
my heart
still
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 16, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Excellent write here James...enjoyed....best wishes.
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:17 PM
Falling to a delightful abyss,i can 'feel',the resonating 'heartbeat',awesome!
Foulk Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:04 PM
this was a wonderful and great read James.
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 7:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry James. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. Wishing you joy and sunshine in your life that you might find inspiration to carry on with your writing. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:25 PM
Good tetractys, James. I wish you luck in this contest.
Mehta Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Very impressive expressions on abyss, James
Deane Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 5:02 PM
You amaze me with your ability to use different forms of poetry, lovely write...
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