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Bleaks Abyss

Bleak my life endless strife to where, darkness consumed by an abyss so delightful I now fall, in entering, smiling I appease echoes resonates my heart still

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Date: 6/16/2011 11:32:00 AM
Excellent write here James...enjoyed....best wishes.
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Date: 6/15/2011 11:17:00 PM
Falling to a delightful abyss,i can 'feel',the resonating 'heartbeat',awesome!
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Date: 6/15/2011 2:04:00 PM
this was a wonderful and great read James.
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Date: 6/15/2011 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry James. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. Wishing you joy and sunshine in your life that you might find inspiration to carry on with your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:25:00 PM
Good tetractys, James. I wish you luck in this contest.
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Date: 6/14/2011 6:39:00 PM
Very impressive expressions on abyss, James
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Date: 6/14/2011 5:02:00 PM
You amaze me with your ability to use different forms of poetry, lovely write...
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