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Bleak Days

Bleak Days


cold bleak days of life
may visit in future time
with hardships unknown
bonded as one side by side
warm love will ease our frostbite


© Sandra M. Haight 2015 
   All Rights Reserved


~4th Place~
Contest: Get Romantic ~ Visual 7
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Judged: 03/06/2015

Syllables checked:  5-7-5-7-7



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Casarah Nance Date: 3/11/2015 5:30:00 PM aww, our love will ease our frostbite, nice! Grats on your win :) Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/13/2015 6:58:00 PM Hi Casarah, thank you for stopping by with your nice comment and congratulations. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/9/2015 1:06:00 AM Despite the snow, this is heartwarming, Sandra...congrats on your great win!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:35:00 PM Thank you so much, Rhonda. So nice of you to stop by with your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A Date: 3/8/2015 6:16:00 PM SANDRA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/8/2015 11:55:00 AM Sandra, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/7/2015 6:43:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:36:00 PM Thank you so much, Debbie. I appreciate your stopping by with your congratulations. Sandra

Joseph May Date: 3/7/2015 3:40:00 PM Wonderful write Sandra...Congrats on your win Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:38:00 PM Thank you so much, Joseph, for your nice comment and congrats. Sandra

Jan Allison Date: 3/7/2015 2:47:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:43:00 PM Thank you, Jan. I always look forward to your nice comments. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw Date: 3/7/2015 8:31:00 AM Congrats Sandra! Yes, love will ease all future hardships. I love your theme! Hugs, Kimberly Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:44:00 PM Hi Kimberly, it's wonderful to read the different ways poets interpret these visuals. So happy you enjoyed mine, and I thank you for stopping by with your congrats. Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless Date: 3/7/2015 7:52:00 AM Sandra, this put me in mind of a really old song entitled, (I think) "Side by Side". nicely different take on the theme, well deserved win. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:46:00 PM Thank you so much, John. I appreciate your stopping by with your nice comment and congratulations. Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/7/2015 5:45:00 AM Hi Sandra ...CONGRATS Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:46:00 PM Thank you, Rajat. I always appreciate your comments. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2015 11:36:00 PM Sandra. this is very well done. I especially liked your final line and your likening the whole snowscape to trials that come to us in life. Congrats on a great win in my contest. Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 3:34:00 PM Hi Andrea, once again, I enjoyed participating in your contest. I find the visuals quite fun, and I am so pleased that liked my offering. Thank you so much for the nice placement. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/5/2015 12:45:00 AM This is scary with the thought of colder winters in the future Sandra. Excellent tanka for the contest. Gl. hugs, Connie 7 Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/5/2015 7:56:00 AM Yes, Connie, colder winters, or perhaps using it as a metaphor for any hardship life may bring. Thank you for stopping by with your positive comment. Hugs, Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 3/4/2015 11:51:00 AM So sweet..warm love will ease our frostbite...love is the prime mover...Great write Sandra. God bless. Love)))rajat Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/5/2015 7:57:00 AM Thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comment, Rajat. Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/4/2015 7:06:00 AM beautiful Sandra.. :) we chose the same visual.. :)! God bless on the contest.. :)! thanks for visiting my poems.. :) I am sorry for being late to reply.. been so busy this days.. :( //olive eloisa Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/5/2015 7:58:00 AM Hi Olive, yes, it is so interesting to read how other poets interpret the visuals, isn't it? I appreciate your stopping by with your supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra

Emile Pinet Date: 3/3/2015 10:16:00 AM It says a lot without much thought, excellent in both from and delivery. Emile. #7 Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/5/2015 7:59:00 AM Thank you, Emile, for your positive comment and support. Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/3/2015 1:28:00 AM Wonderfully done Sandra! great imagery! Gl in contest! Thnx for visit to my page! Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/5/2015 8:00:00 AM I appreciate your encouraging comment, Dr. Upma. Thank you so much. Sandra

Laura Leiser Date: 3/2/2015 4:50:00 PM I'm glad you mentioned frostbite, Sara! I thought this poor couple looked really cold in this picture...even the passing thought occurred that they may have died there together that day! Good write :) Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/2/2015 5:02:00 PM Thanks, Laura. Hopefully, that was my "twist" Andrea wanted per her rules! Thank you for stopping by to read my poem and commenting. Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser Date: 3/2/2015 4:51:00 PM Sorry, I meant SANDRA!

Jan Allison Date: 3/2/2015 2:57:00 PM Beautiful Tanka Sandra - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Sandra Haight Date: 3/2/2015 5:00:00 PM Thank you, Jan. So appreciate your kind attention with your nice comments! :) Hugs, Sandra