Trina Layne Poet Etheree

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Honourable Mention 

Brian Strand's Poetry Contest

Judged: 19th March, 2025

Bleak

come
back heart
into arms 
that are nonsense
since your departure-
where will I lodge revenge
should I punch the ether out
victimize the ozone layer
what world will be mine in your passing~
as grey as the grave that robbed me reckless

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Sara Kendrick March 21, 2025 at 3:03 PM Creative winning work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

David Crandall February 16, 2025 at 10:05 AM Nice poem, it seems like a bleak, and futile feeling. Trina Layne March 16, 2025 at 10:43 PM I did a retake on this one. Thanks for the new title! Trina Layne February 16, 2025 at 11:10 AM Yeah. It is :(. It was inspired by a recent death, a friend who lost his wife suddenly, just a few days before Valentine's.