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Orange and Pink Flowers during Daytime

Blazing New Trails-Rhyme Battle

Blazing New Trails

Madam of her dam trust her happy clam in earnest, 
Under his falls of thunder she calls pappy her first. 
His pearls light up the night, swirls on buttercup's surface,
tender though increasing crescendo until embers burst.

connie pachecho

8/10/17

Inspired by reading the entries to
Rhyme Battle: Happiness: Round 8

madam, dam, clam, trust, first, burst, earnest, surface, happy, pappy
under, thunder, falls, calls,pearls, swirls, light, night, though, crescendo
tender, embers, up, buttercup's
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August 17, 2017 at 6:11 AM
Let me give it a try. James Horn
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