Blazing Dumpster

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Margarita's Dumpster Fire Contest ~ January 15, 2025

Flames licked the dumpster on First Avenue Firemen arrived, so did the men in blue Four vagrants were all aghast Burned to a crisp, their repast They'd fired up the bin for a barbeque

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2025 2:23:00 PM

You made me smile but it also is a sad scenario Lin, hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/15/2025 3:53:00 PM

Lin, a funny and sad at the same time, well composed limerick with consistent meter—which is an accomplishment. It has suspense too (what’s happening really) and that makes me smile! At least it’s not LA that’s being roasted.