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Blame It On Winter-W

Wild winter disguised
Sends messages to senses
Blame not my madness

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8th place

The season I have chosen is winter.

For contest Seasons Senryu by Linda-Marie Bariana

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Mitch White

Date: 6/26/2010 1:25:00 PM

Interesting write on madness, Dr- ty for your comment on Poet Tree- but,,, will Brian feel the same Hmmm

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 6:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" DR. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:35:00 PM

Interesting perception of senses sharing the same space as madness. Makes you think about the first line more and more each time you read it! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:13:00 PM

congratulations on your win with this thought provoking one! LUv, Andrea

Date: 6/19/2010 1:42:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

Sarah Hales

Date: 6/18/2010 5:26:00 AM

Great write !! sarah Thank you for all your kind words on my work x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 9:08:00 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my contest with this wonderful write.. so appreciate your support of my contests constantly.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Heather Hill

Date: 6/16/2010 6:58:00 PM

The winter madness, I know much how this may feel being born and raised in Minnesota. Great write, thanks for the kind words on mine :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/15/2010 7:21:00 AM

Great write Dr. Ram, best wishes for the contest - rgds WN

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 6/14/2010 2:49:00 PM

great write!..enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 7:17:00 AM

thanks for your answer to my blog. You should try one day the vanilla flavored tootsie rolls!! LUv, Andrea

Marie Harrison

Date: 6/13/2010 8:14:00 PM

Oh, I love this one. Great job.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/13/2010 7:14:00 PM

Dr. Ram, the Bard! Yes, it reaches for the Bard and not in an arch way, but honestly. I like it. It reads like a minor quote from the 12th Night or the Tempest. You have the poet's trace on yourbrain and in your soul. Thank you and regards, Gerard.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 6/13/2010 11:51:00 AM

Dr. Ram, thnx for your comments left on my writes. Always appreciated! Jimmy

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/13/2010 9:33:00 AM

Great write Dr. Mehta. My best wishes for your contest. And many thanks for your precious comments on my new Poem 'Lines Life and our Faith in God'. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra......Dr. R Mehta

Carol Fillmore

Date: 6/13/2010 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my recent posting! I like "Blame it on winter....I like this!

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/13/2010 6:57:00 AM

oh yes glad I stopped by and checked it out this made me smile for winter does free da brain esp up here in minnesota where it can reach 60-80 below yikes this should do well in the contest also thanks for your kind comment on mine

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/13/2010 3:51:00 AM

Nicely presented "Winter-Haiku", Dr. Ram! Wish you success in Linda's contest and thank you for your kind comments! Have a nice Sunday...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2010 9:41:00 PM

I like yours too. Kind of personification like mine too! Good luck in the contest, Dr. Ram!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/12/2010 8:42:00 PM

feelings of winter, perfect! Doc! and thanks for your kind support! jimbo

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/12/2010 8:06:00 PM

nice effort here! And thanks so much for all your kind words lately! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2010 6:46:00 PM

Interesting Senryu that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda Milgate

Date: 6/12/2010 5:01:00 PM

Very nice, blame not my madness, very nice. Thanks for your comments. They are valued.