Blame It On Cupid

Upbeat
     heartbeat

Cupid
      did it

first touch
       did much

now this
       French kiss



explore
       much more


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Contest:Valentine Footles

Sponsor:Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Adorable and sweet...good luck in the contest.
Minardi Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 10:32 AM
Aww, so cute, Kash. Goodluck in the contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 12:01 AM
kash, goose flesh means when your hair stands up on your arms (that is the way I really wanted to say it, but i had to use the way with fewer syllables)
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 7:19 PM
Kash-This is your forte! Nice work-love the title too!
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 10:23 PM
Just stopping by to say hello and goodnight!! Probably you are asleep!!! Or maybe not !!! Anyway, I'm just going to comment and then get back upstairs!!
K. Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 8:33 AM
You sure are getting the hang of these footles, kash! I liked how you linked each footle to the next! Wish you the best in the contest and congrats on all your wins!
Macmillan Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Proof lots can be captured with so little. Lovely ones, Kash! What a sweet read for a busy morning. Hugs, Cyndi
Song Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Couplets are strong and romantic and sizzling and soothing and unbelievably erotic...lol..you will soar in this contest as short forms are your cuppa tea...where is young kash?...missing him here....Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 5:51 PM
wow, you did it REALLY well, Kash. And if I don't place, I can blame it on myself and the fact that you and others followed the rules and did great stuff like THIS.
Horne Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 1:17 PM
LOL, great fun, Kash. Many congrats on your wins : )
Neels Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 11:29 AM
I love the last one especially Kash, yours made me smile tonight ;) all the best with these cuties :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Very nice set of Valentine footles, Kash!! Dane Ann is sure to love this one and I wish you success in her contest. (The last two footbles are my favorites!) Thanks for bearing with me through these health issues and now a broken computer. I'm borrowing one now and am so happy to see this delightful entry for Dane Ann's contest. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 9:20 AM
very french and dazzling the imagination, kashi buddy... getting hot in here, yeah!... winning luck to you!..:) huggs!
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