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Blacky

BLACKY Blacky is a large (of course black) black cat Who simply takes with me (and little else) his room and board With food he never strikes a mood His passion is shrimp shrimp in all his food Blacky is bored easily as are the main feline brood He eats he sleeps he’d talk if he could Petting is first loved then tolerated Too much affection Blacky is sated (ho hum) But let those tiny silky tail-fins stick out of a bowl He’s dancing around and ready to roll Oh, then, how he loves then how he rushes then how he nudges prances brushes! He’ll give me to know I’m his dearest friend His antics (of the moment) never bend Never fear his affections are merely on lend For once bottomed out that is the end At least temporarily

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/11/2011 6:09:00 PM
Love your furry friend Daver, Obviously you love him too, giving shrimp indeed!
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:48:00 AM
Coming back to Blacky. I really like this one, Daver!! He sounds so much like that thanksless cat of mine Sookie!
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Date: 7/22/2011 10:30:00 AM
Finicky creatures they are, Daver. Your love and affection for Blacky remain constant while his are "merely on lend." Got a great laugh from this one, dear, and I know how much you love your cats. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/22/2011 4:06:00 AM
Very descriptive of a cat and its attitude..Enoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work was uplifting...Sara
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:27:00 AM
You harbour a patron of gastronomy, Daver? Not only has he acquired the art and science of food, but knows where to find it.:) Fun and sweet write, one this fine onyx cat won't turn his nose at.:) Hope your weather is good and the heat isn't unbareable. Wishing you and yours the best!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/18/2011 12:16:00 PM
very cute .. Blacky sounds like a great pet.. much like my Gabriel cat who is sleek and fast and always into trouble of some kind... have to try the shrimp dish.. fine taste dining Daver.. haha.. great tribute to a worthy feline luv..
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:59:00 PM
Sure enjoyed reading this Dave :) I could just imagine Blacky -- hmm maybe I am also a relative of his? I love shrimps :) haha. Very interesting cat you have :D hugs
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:42:00 AM
I like this write of yours Dave! I am terribly allergic to cats, but I love them at a distance. I love to hear poetry about them as well, it reduces the sadness of not being able to raise the itchy critters ! Have a wonderful weekend dear poet ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:12:00 PM
He sounds funny. I loved reading this one, Daver., It's pure delight to read about one of your cats!
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Date: 7/12/2011 6:12:00 PM
oh you got that feline thing down pat, Daver. Or does he have you ? hmm My cats I know got me down pretty good....but shrimp?
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:47:00 PM
Loved this one Daver. Made me think of my Smokey. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:37:00 PM
5 stars for fun and good writing, daver.. greeat kitty piece..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:32:00 PM
lol. Excatly as most cats are. But ya gotta love them. Anyhow, Chapter four is much longer than I tought it would be - I am still writing - almost complete now. I will email you chapter 3 - which is short and chapter 4 - soon, and I will make sure each chapter has page numbers. Big love, Dave. Lainie
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:24:00 PM
A good, entertaining write...full of smiles. I have two cats and they are affectionate, but crafty...and jealous of each other. Petting has to be evenly shared!
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:55:00 PM
You can say that again. daver
Date: 7/11/2011 12:16:00 PM
Enjoyed the humor in this..great job
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:03:00 PM
enjoyed this one Daver, well written and so creative. Have not heard from you in a while, don't be a stranger.
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