Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

Black-Rain

*BLACK~RAIN*

**My wedding day**
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my finest moment
washed away with white satin
nightmare from heaven


**Bleeding Love**
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dreams never revealed
swimming in a pool of blood
dark clouds forever


**Eclipse with tears**
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Dark Crystal Lightning
blue skies, deep watercolors
over the rainbow


**Gods Punishment**
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useless way of life
40 days and 40 nights
grave yard promises

by;p.d.

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:07 PM go away rain **SKAT**

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 12, 2014 at 12:14 AM just giftedly sifting through some of your mothuh truckin old sKool Shitake. Imma fool for yir Haiku! YO.

Robin Davis April 3, 2014 at 7:33 PM PD These are some interesting and emotional little poems. Each one has its own feelings in it for the reader to grasp. Thank you for the nice comment on my Umbrella poem.

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2013 at 11:51 PM PD. I don't mind if you put my poem low on your list. I didn't realize I had not followed any rule. anyway, I hope you are having a good week. I really love my time off work and am dreading going back to work!!

Cheryl Aldea August 26, 2011 at 10:44 PM this is nice! awesome haikus. keep on sharing. regards, cheryl

Nisath Jahan Laboni May 14, 2011 at 1:33 PM I like it..

James Fraser May 8, 2011 at 8:00 AM Pow-er-ful writing crammed with emotion pd, just terrific....:) smiles 4 u

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 7, 2011 at 10:45 AM just dropping by to say hi (& good night, magandang gabi) pzztop-- can I still call you that? I searched them up :) & so did you do any lumba lumba watching today? hmmm :) well I hope your day's been good-- it finally rained here today-- do you know that rain here is called ulan? anyway kamusta (sounds so much like como esta?) hope I spelled that right? see you around ok? you now me I am a mushroom starting soon -- :)

Dinda Minardi May 2, 2011 at 9:10 AM I like the bleeding love :)

Anne Rutherford April 29, 2011 at 6:20 AM DP. you have a way with haiku poems.My favourite is Eclipse with Tears . good writing here . Anne

Matt Hunt April 27, 2011 at 12:58 AM I enjoyed these very much as well, especially "God's Punishment" It was very deep if only a few syllables:D Wonderful.

Michael J. Falotico April 25, 2011 at 2:53 PM I love your comments and love how you always get my writes... Hope your doing well love... missed you xoox

Judy Konos March 19, 2011 at 1:19 PM Your titles even tell a story, "MY WEDDING DAY, BLEEDING LOVE, ECLIPSE WITH TEARS, GODS PUNISHMENT"!

Chelsea Stufleben February 28, 2011 at 12:12 PM I love this:D stunning work:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 21, 2011 at 12:32 PM hey missy pd! where have you been again??? how are you scooby doo??

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 10:50 PM Nice set of haiku which individually deliver great descriptiveness. This is impressive material.

Heather Miles February 1, 2011 at 12:23 PM awesome haikus! i love it!

Abe Lopez January 28, 2011 at 8:50 AM Nice series of writes.... good to hear from you!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 25, 2011 at 8:10 AM no new writes, pd? well I hope you post new ones soon :) just saying hi :) and thanks for all your comments -- haha I commented over at your blog-- and me?? guilty??/ who's sounding guilty?? lol!! haha if you must know I sweated over that limerick, lol :D thanks again :)

Ravindra K Kapoor January 24, 2011 at 6:58 PM Amazingly beautiful Haiku series. Wonderful write my friend. If it is for a contest my good wishes for your entry. I have placed a new Poem' When One Sing a Song or Dance'. To appreciate it properly, please view the Photo Poem URL given on my face book. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Poet D.

Julie Heckman January 23, 2011 at 7:59 AM nice work I love ready haiku from an modern american point of view. Thanks Julie

Deb Radke January 20, 2011 at 6:46 AM Wonderful. Just wonderful writing. Everything a haiku should be. My best, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 19, 2011 at 5:34 AM Hey PD my BFF .. good to see your comments always... after my "SPICY" contest am taking a break in contest land... so much going on ... not enough time in a day .... appreciate your encouraging words of friendship and luv... your BFF for life...

Harry Horsman January 17, 2011 at 11:20 PM P.D i'd give anything for any type of rain at the moment, 100 degrees everyday for weeks now, the east of australia in floods, us in the west nothing. any how i digress, you are a brilliant poet, miss destroyer. Harry

Audrey Haick January 17, 2011 at 10:56 AM Good afternoon, p.d. wonderful Haikus! Thanks for the congratulations. lol I'm sure it was very genuine..from your heart, but mine didn't place just as was expected..Regardless, it sure was fun! Always, Annalise

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