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Blackout!

I sat in my room Watching TV When all of a sudden Something tuned on the screen A prison escapee not far from here Was said to have been spotted somewhere near. I boarded the windows Locked all the doors Closed all the curtains And got to the floor I told myself there was nothing to fear For my parents would soon be here I worried to much, I need to calm down Until from outside, I heard a strange sound The sound of nail screeching against the brick wall It was nothing like I have ever heard, never at all I thought my mind was playing games on me Until I looked outside, not a single spot of light could be seen Was I the only person left on the block I started to worry, I stared at the clock When would they get here, where could they be Whatevers taking them so long, sure is a mystery. I slowly walked down the dark flight of stairs When I finally reached the bottom, I gasped for air I had this strange feeling running through my gut I knew something was happening, but what? I heard another strange noise coming from outside I ran to the living room, and slowly peeked outside It was my parents car sitting in the driveway, But wait, wait a second, where were they? I did not hear the opening of the door I did not hear their feet walk across the floor Something was wrong, something was not right I ran to my bedroom, and shut the door tight I hid under my bed, shaking with fright I knew I was going to die, when out went the lights.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 9:52:00 AM
oh wow i need to know whats next like a good story i was clinging to your words wondering whats next whats next, you left me hanging on a cliff here!i loved it tho thats the thing about a good poem it leaves you wishing for more of those beautiful words. a mexican murderer was lost in our neighbrhood once, for real he had just killed two people and was running around breaking nto homes and trying to take people hostage, he tried my neighbors and they had a gun so he ran on! good poem! =)jo
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Date: 1/21/2010 12:12:00 PM
Wow!!This one is very scary too!! enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:05:00 AM
Absolutely frightening, Daniel! You've done an exceptional job here-great imagery, flow and suspense! Thoroughly captivating! Great job! Peace, audrey
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Date: 1/14/2010 2:57:00 PM
Ooooh, scarey, Daniel! This could have been an episode of Twilight Zone. It reads like something Stephen King might have written and that's quite a compliment! Awesome! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:27:00 PM
crEEEEEEEpy! as well as well written :) leep going! ------Ell
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:30:00 PM
OOOH, a good creepy one there!! Good imagination! andrea
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