Blackhawk Dawn

In rugged mountains of beige
A mission has been set
To rid a faction of rebels
Where conflict will be met

Eradication 
To return a country to good
Dispose of the unwanted
For the feud to conclude

Near the Helmand River valley
A major offensive is set
U.S. Marine push
Juniors and Vets

Its not even daylight
As i radio them in
Colleagues of three
Hereford's unique fighting men

In our covered position
The Taliban are sighted
Car bombings, slaughter
Rotor blades we invited

A distant sound
Of birds of war
Bringing Marines
Bullets, hard gore

From the valley rises
Western army brawn
In formation flight
Blackhawk Dawn





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Brown Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Happy Easter to you and yours James. Love Carol and Family
Roberts Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 7:59 PM
Laura is right, yu should be writing us a novel, each piece of prose leaves us wanting continuation
Mckenzie Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 12:39 PM
James~ You should write a fiction novel I love your adventures side a great feat here my friend keep wowing us! Laura :)
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April 2, 2010 at 12:21 PM
Great good over evil write in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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