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'black-Eyed Susan'

My name is Susan, Black-Eyed Susan I am called,
     I am hardy, one real tough fighting flower;  I was
born in a lovely cottage garden years and years ago,
     surrounded by so many sweet and beautiful friends. Oh there
     was Daisy and Iris, Coral Bell, Primrose and Violet.
     We loved swaying in the sun and we loved the bees and butterflies 
                                                               who visited,
   but my friends died one after another and I was left all alone.
        In fact, the cottage is gone now and the garden is gone too;
          Trains roar past but mostly it is quiet,
      so,  I went deep beneath the dark earth, waiting . . . 
                                   then, one day I peaked out-   and decided to grow.

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September 2, 2017


Poetry/Personification/'Black-Eyed Susan'
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R. V. Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:41 PM
From the comments I come to know that you are Constance, not just Broken Wings! A nice poem, Constance. There's a touch of pathos in it, which I like ,too. Good luck to you:) By the way, Constance, I too have an entry for Kim's contest: "Oh, beautiful Rose." Please read it and I would appreciate your comments.
Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:51 AM
A great Personification Constance...best of luck my friend...god bless...hope all is well...^WW^
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:46 AM
Yeess! This is a perfect write for the contest! I really loved this poem Constance! You have surely written a magnificent poem, and I loved reading it this morning! What a stunning flower you picked, I love this hardy flower! Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:24 PM
What a perfect poem for the contest, Constance. At first I saw the title and I thought, Did I click on Susan's poems (is she back?) REmember her? She used Black Eye Susan as her AKA. I miss her. If she were here, I bet she would have chosen this flower too!
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:13 PM
A sweet tone to this lovely poem--well written BW--good luck for a win!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Love this! Had me grinning at the title and all the way through. Best to you in the contest lovely :) xomo!
Parker Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 5:59 PM
this poem should do well in the contest, you captured personification very well...good luck
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 5:31 PM
oh what wonderful personification Constance! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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