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Blackened Ocean Waters

Blackened ocean waters
At the setting of the sun
Golden sand decorates the beach
A beacon for all to come 

Dangerous black towering rocks
Jut out from the shore
As the darken clouds reflect
The golden sun along even more

The mighty waves touched
Shore, with the symphony of sound
Waves then come courting the shore
In their wispy bridal gown

Waves kiss the mighty rocks
Slowly wear them down 
Softened with eons of time
Going slowly soft and round

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/19/2009 8:24:00 PM
Awesome! I can picture the view you present with beautiful words. A great quatrain. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your very nice comments on my poem. I am honored. Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 11/19/2009 12:30:00 PM
This is a wonderful rhyme Sara, and beautifully written >> James
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Date: 11/18/2009 7:58:00 PM
Very beautiful choice of words and flow of verses on this one, Sara, so enjoyed the descriptive quality .. thankxxx for sharing tonight... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:13:00 AM
Hi Sara, Love the ocean and all that goes with it. This was a nice little walk on the beach this morning! Smile. A wonderful poetic rhyme. Thanks for sharing, Keep writing! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:49:00 AM
VERY nicely done, Sara...makes me wanna' go walk on the beach and watch the sunset - Tim
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:39:00 AM
Hi, Sara. Very nice description. I enjoyed reading this soft flow of this poem. Florentina
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:36:00 AM
Hi, Sara, thank you for your reminder on facebook! I do like this poem very and I could see with closed eyes the rocks and the waterfront. I lived at Antofagasta in the 1960ies (close by the Pacific) and also on Efate, Vanuatu, surrounded by the ocean....Gert
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