Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Blackened Ocean Waters

Blackened ocean waters
At the setting of the sun
Golden sand decorates the beach
A beacon for all to come 

Dangerous black towering rocks
Jut out from the shore
As the darken clouds reflect
The golden sun along even more

The mighty waves touched
Shore, with the symphony of sound
Waves then come courting the shore
In their wispy bridal gown

Waves kiss the mighty rocks
Slowly wear them down 
Softened with eons of time
Going slowly soft and round

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix November 19, 2009 at 8:24 PM Awesome! I can picture the view you present with beautiful words. A great quatrain. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your very nice comments on my poem. I am honored. Love and blessings, Caroline.

James Fraser November 19, 2009 at 12:30 PM This is a wonderful rhyme Sara, and beautifully written >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 18, 2009 at 7:58 PM Very beautiful choice of words and flow of verses on this one, Sara, so enjoyed the descriptive quality .. thankxxx for sharing tonight... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

P Sheart November 18, 2009 at 10:13 AM Hi Sara, Love the ocean and all that goes with it. This was a nice little walk on the beach this morning! Smile. A wonderful poetic rhyme. Thanks for sharing, Keep writing! Love Light Patty

Tim Ryerson November 18, 2009 at 4:49 AM VERY nicely done, Sara...makes me wanna' go walk on the beach and watch the sunset - Tim

Florentina Laic November 18, 2009 at 4:39 AM Hi, Sara. Very nice description. I enjoyed reading this soft flow of this poem. Florentina

Gert W. Knop November 18, 2009 at 4:36 AM Hi, Sara, thank you for your reminder on facebook! I do like this poem very and I could see with closed eyes the rocks and the waterfront. I lived at Antofagasta in the 1960ies (close by the Pacific) and also on Efate, Vanuatu, surrounded by the ocean....Gert