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Blackbirds and Bluebirds

Inconsiderate
Hearts will lack in elation
Throwing the first stone

Pain revisited
The quiet desperation
Soothes my aching bones

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February 24, 2009 at 8:14 PM

Interesting use of this concise form for a creative view. Much to think about here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Brian Strand

February 17, 2009 at 11:52 PM

Like the sequence presentation Yoni.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my blog

Carolyn Devonshire

February 13, 2009 at 7:56 PM

I agree that "inconsiderate hearts lack in elation." Tormented souls do not know how to be happy. Great Haiku! Carolyn

Keith Bickerstaffe

February 12, 2009 at 8:46 AM

Brilliant my friend! Excellent long 'a' assonance, marvelous rhyming and stunning imagery... perfect HAIKUS in form and expression. Best wishes, Keith