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Blackbird Jungle

pink,pink persistent protests proclaim pussy purrs content with his game- on his veranda with much disdain- I'll siesta here 'til it rains Note: We are vacation-sitting our daughter's cat this past fortnight or so

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Date: 8/8/2009 11:08:00 AM
enjoyed this! soup-mail...
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:41:00 AM
Delightful use of alliteration and a well-described portrait of your cat waiting for the rain to end. Nice cingku, Brian! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:23:00 AM
Have a great time brother...wonderful sound of color and sounds..well done.
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Date: 8/8/2009 7:59:00 AM
Enjoy and Relax-a pleasure to read my friend--charma
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Date: 8/8/2009 7:12:00 AM
Hope your daughter enjoys her vacation as much as you are enjoying her cat!! :) Carrie
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Date: 8/8/2009 7:04:00 AM
Cute. Enjoy the vacation.
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Date: 8/8/2009 1:57:00 AM
I get the same kind of duty around here. Have fun cat-sitting and writing. Sara
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