Blackbird

Blackbird Atop a pine of perfect symmetry- a blackbird where a star should be. Suzanne Delaney

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/27/2021 11:18:00 AM

An absolutely charming brevity ~

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/7/2013 7:23:00 PM

Dear Suzanne, Great imagery, I could see the lights on the tree.I wonder if edgar Allen POE decorated it.Superb Pen.LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 4/5/2013 11:22:00 PM

Wonderful poem. Welcome to the soup. I love poems about animals so I had to read this first.

Frank Polgar

Date: 4/4/2013 12:35:00 PM

Great imagery.

Annie Lander

Date: 4/3/2013 3:41:00 PM

A verse can say so much welcome...

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/3/2013 10:08:00 PM

Thanks Annie:)

David Ehrgott

Date: 4/3/2013 12:59:00 PM

short, simple, and to the point perfect poetry

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/3/2013 10:08:00 PM

Thanks David

David Williams

Date: 4/2/2013 2:27:00 PM

Suzanne a wonderful image...David

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2013 6:30:00 PM

Thanks David...It is a funny thing to watch the crows fighting over the top perch in the Norfolk pines. It made me think of a Christmas tree