Blackberry Bush

Blackberries start as white dots in a sea of thorns
The flower will fade, and a green berry will join
Protected, it will grow and be pink
Safe from even a massacring mink
Larger, it will swell until it is red
No enemy can lay down their head
Darker and darker until it is black
The berries are ready for an attack
Sour, but delectable
The thorns are detectable
But what about the thornless blackberry bush?

Poor girl, she starts off white
Like the others that night
She grows into a misshapen berry
Unlike the others (who are), lucky? Very.
She stays as the others grow
Poor berry, behind she tows
The rest are protected by thorns of steel
But this poor one just needs a deal

From green to pink to red to black
The other blackberry is held far back
If only she could get some thorns
To protect her from the world's horns


The neglected female, without protection
Her parents have given her no love and affection
The other ones shall grow strong
Their parents are never gone

-September of 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/15/2020 10:37:00 PM
From green to pink to red to black/ The other blackberry is held far back/ If only she could get some thorns/ To protect her from the world's thorns/// allegorically wise writings
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A. Ryeter
Date: 9/30/2020 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, Mr. Bangalee. I have made a mistake in the poem with writing thorns twice. It is supposed to be 'the world's horns', but still, thank you very much.
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