Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Blackberries, Blackberries

Blackberries, blackberries, what’s the big deal?
They’ve too many seeds, and they give me no thrill.
They’re actually tart and they’re only sweet when
placed into a pie. Are they even good then?

Likewise the strawberry is not all that great
except if you eat it along with your mate.
You see how in movies some great lover dips
that berry in chocolate for his lover’s lips.

Think of all berries that you’ve ever had.
Cranberries, mulberries, etc. . . . all bad!
Berries just aren’t BERRY good. From elderberry
to  choke(me)berry. And please forget the gooseberry!

Raspberries, boysenberries, and blueberries too.
THOSE are the only three I care to do!
But blackberries, blackberries. What good are THEY?
Unless they are sweetened, I’ll throw them away.

Aug. 6, 2022
For Matt Caliri's Your Thoughts On Blackberries Poetry Contest

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I Am Anaya September 7, 2022 at 6:15 PM Lol. "Berries just aren’t BERRY good" But are GOOD for you! I like them in smoothies! ;) Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2022 at 8:40 PM yes, they ARE good in smoothies!!

Juliet Ligon August 9, 2022 at 2:51 PM Have you only tried them from a grocery store? They are so sweet and smell like honey when they're fresh off the bush, unless you pick them before they're ripe. Eh, anyways, was a fun poem to read. Good luck in the contest. Andrea Dietrich August 10, 2022 at 1:27 PM actually, I HAVE tasted ones that were not tart. I just wanted to be different and make it humorous. According to the doctor who wrote Eat 4 Your blood Type, I should not eat blackberries OR strawberries. but the ones I like, blueberries and raspberries ARE on the list of berries I should eat!

Bill Baker August 9, 2022 at 1:19 PM I'm with you, Andrea. Berries, forget about it! Nice entry for the contest. Have some fun today! Bill

Anitha Jayasankar August 8, 2022 at 4:07 AM Loved reading your thoughts on blackberries Ria... I hope you are getting more time to write poems....Best wishes in the contest sweet friend.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Harry Horsman August 7, 2022 at 10:04 PM Oh dear, i disagree with you, for the first time in years. Love the poetry though, the message gets through, and the sentiment. Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2022 at 8:20 AM I exaggerated for (hopefully) a humorous effect. I do eat them on occasion, but I am not a big fruit lover of any kind except watermelon. I do love raspberry shakes and berry pies!

Pashang Salehi August 7, 2022 at 7:27 PM Besides poetry, I bet you are a great baker as well...When I read the title, I thought you were talking about Blackberry... Life was much easier when apple and blackberry were just fruits... Best of luck... Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2022 at 7:30 PM yes, I am talking about berries here. All kinds of them!

Jennifer Walker August 7, 2022 at 3:19 PM Thought this rather funny; dissing a blackberry or any berry for the matter. Loved the meter and of course your rhyming,

Anne E Sangster - K August 7, 2022 at 12:27 PM I hear you there Andrea. Good for pies as they can be tart. Love your blackberry poem! Best of luck in the contest. Cheers my friend :-)

Rico Leffanta August 7, 2022 at 11:39 AM I enjoyed reading your perspective. Well done! Aloha!

Weston Gregory August 7, 2022 at 9:04 AM Andrea your piece exposes the romanticizing of these berries. A nice write.

Victor Buhagiar August 7, 2022 at 6:54 AM I love blackberries but here we import them. I must apologize for my tardiness but I have a feeling someone has illegally infiltrated my list of poets I follow. This is not the first time (unless I'm losing my mind :))

Connie Marcum Wong August 6, 2022 at 10:02 PM Black berries used to grow wild in Fresno and we used to pick them so our mom could make blackberry cobbler and it was delicious. I love your take on the Contest Andrea. I think he will too. Blessings xxoo Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2022 at 9:41 AM I DO love them in cobblers and pies. Probably good in milk shakes too.

Janice Canerdy August 6, 2022 at 8:26 PM Very descriptive and expressive. The prompt didn't ask for praise--just a poem about blackberries. Janice

Mike Bayles August 6, 2022 at 6:42 PM Very nice, Andrea. Nice meter and rhyme. I don't think I'd like blackberries either. Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2022 at 9:40 AM they really are not THAT bad. I actually put them above strawberries for taste. They just are not in my top three. I had fun just blasting them.