Blackberries

The Bramble has dealt me finger sores,
Fruit juice and blood on sensitive pores,
Blackberry preserve stick and sweet,
Sunday delicious for five o'clock treat.

Don't pick the red ones, mother would shout,
Leave till next week, black ripened are out,
Save some for Bramley's, soft crusted bake,
Forage and plunder all you can take.



Written 28.7.22 for the Blackberries contest
sponsored by Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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December 19, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Hi Kevin. Enjoyed your poem. Brought back many fond memories of blackberrying, removing the grubs and boiling down to make the jam. Tony
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