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Black Winter She hid behind veil The coldness Her companion The umbrella her armor I died Years before Her last kiss In heaven I adore I shed tears At my widows pain In paradise I go insanely insane Black widows Weep in the dark Dead spies No one finds, eaten by sharks Shifting winds Freezing rains Snow drops reliving The survivor’s pain As she walks down her rue of memories Umbrella shielding her tormented face Embracing the coldness, embracing lost fate Teardrops wipe the history from her case We never existed us two When I died under enemy plans My lover had to flee her fathers land No one is safe at Palestinian hands Hatred buried so deep Hamas bloody knifes never sleep Child and foe, kill them for the goal My lover is dead, Arabic beauties lost soul Israel is the Promised Land

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Date: 5/12/2016 1:01:00 PM
Arthur, Superb write. Nice concept & brilliant lay out. Enjoyed every stanza. A7............//:) hugs
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Manmath
Date: 5/9/2016 8:17:00 PM
B E A U T I F U L
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:24:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings, soon I will have a blog about this, as its based on an old book I just read! :)
Date: 5/9/2016 7:25:00 PM
such a powerful pen my friend - the imagery is so so intense:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2016 5:35:00 PM
Senseless violence always kills in a way those left behind. Sobering poem.
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Date: 5/9/2016 10:17:00 AM
striking symbolism of divisiveness so intense and pensive... great last line...huggs!
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:22:00 PM
Hello Nette, just doing some catch up, reading and commenting! Thanks!
Date: 5/9/2016 9:22:00 AM
Powerful She hid behind veil The coldness Her companion The umbrella her armor" "Shifting winds Freezing rains Snow drops reliving The survivor’s pain" Descriptions that just seep into the soul and devastation of the person. Well said.
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Casarah! hugs!
Date: 5/9/2016 1:18:00 AM
Powerful and profound words to contemplate Arthur! Your work is so diverse I never know what to expect. This was excellent! ; )
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Connie! hugs