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Black Widow

She's got a plan just moved to Florida one week in the hole a forced proposal... "yeah... uh... maybe if I get a job with insurance; we'll get married... then you'll have insurance too!" a bribe the spider web is officially constructed "Charlotte's web" no...we'll name it the Black Widow!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/1/2012 12:22:00 AM
Simple thoughts all fuse together to paint the intended picture good work. :)
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Date: 1/11/2012 7:50:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us JSL. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2012 7:42:00 AM
not much of a proposal, but I suppose that's the point! she reels him in with logic, then eats him alive :) nice!
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:07:00 PM
the spider web officially constructed...I like the way u weave ur wrds drastic...! cheers again !
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:17:00 AM
hahaha, I love this one. I wish I knew how to be like that black widow. I am a big pushover letting the big bugs walk all over me. Sorry I can only see one poem and move on. I'm at joe's puter and have little time to get back to all my comments. Appreciate you. Andrea
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Date: 1/7/2012 9:25:00 PM
Nice one Joey!
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Date: 1/7/2012 10:10:00 AM
Clever write! I enjoyed the poem a lot JSLambert! Fun write, he's falling into the trap of the widow, the black widow! Poor man!! Awesome Work!!
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