Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Personification

Black Widow

She's got a plan
just moved to Florida
one week in the hole
a forced proposal...

"yeah...
uh...
maybe if I get a job with insurance;
we'll get married...
then you'll have insurance too!"

a bribe
the spider web is officially constructed
"Charlotte's web"
no...we'll name it
the Black Widow!

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Glenn Mccrary February 1, 2012 at 12:22 AM Simple thoughts all fuse together to paint the intended picture good work. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown January 11, 2012 at 7:50 AM I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us JSL. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan January 10, 2012 at 7:42 AM not much of a proposal, but I suppose that's the point! she reels him in with logic, then eats him alive :) nice!

Red Fiery January 8, 2012 at 11:07 PM the spider web officially constructed...I like the way u weave ur wrds ...so drastic...! cheers again !

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2012 at 11:17 AM hahaha, I love this one. I wish I knew how to be like that black widow. I am a big pushover letting the big bugs walk all over me. Sorry I can only see one poem and move on. I'm at joe's puter and have little time to get back to all my comments. Appreciate you. Andrea

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer January 7, 2012 at 9:25 PM Nice one Joey!

Russell Sivey January 7, 2012 at 10:10 AM Clever write! I enjoyed the poem a lot JSLambert! Fun write, he's falling into the trap of the widow, the black widow! Poor man!! Awesome Work!!