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Black Widow

"...betrayal begins with trust." Quote- Phish when the one you love hides in a woven tangled web of lies that stretches across the hole in their soul they wait, sharpening their talons needing to taste your heart's blood as payment for your innocence of being a fool though their love was warm and inviting once it has become colder, more calculating a game played with perspectives broken to inflict pain using trust as a coin of the realm like a weapon until every desire has been satisfied and your heart left to wither and die as it hangs on a web of entrapment until nothing is left in your heart but an empty shell how sad the soul whether through unsatiable hunger or need can move so easily from lover to lover how sordid and complicated the life that can move from passion to betrayal without a thought how empty the heart that runs hot and cold and can never be filled with trusting love 5/21/23 contest Writing Challenge "B-quotes" sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 5/28/2023 9:50:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your winning poem, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 5/27/2023 9:11:00 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, well done, congratulations, I love the music !
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Date: 5/25/2023 3:35:00 PM
Wow! Frederic, The quote inspired you to write a good write. Good title and content. I enjoyed this from start to finish. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 5/21/2023 1:56:00 PM
- Excellent writing for this quote, Frederick - Sad as an empty shell where the pearl should shine - Words of truth - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/21/2023 1:51:00 PM
Frederic, Deeply poignant and sad . The depth of many peoples truth exposed for all to see . Your three ending phrases add so much reflection to the above strung out betrayal. I love ~ how empty the heart that runs hot and can never be filled with trusting love . So many possibilities lost in this way of life . I can’t imagine not trusting . Intense and emotional write. Susan :)
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