Black Water Smack

Throughout our lives, Dad and I have done many things together.
From graduating Crayola crayons to fishing and wiffleball.
To tune-ups on secondhand cars, casinos, and funerals.

In the parking lot after one particularly salty funeral:
Dad and I were holding memorial flowers and vases
The eulogist barked, "Don't forget to pour out the water.
Side by side and on cue, 
Dad and I clownishly poured the flower water 
onto the funeral home parking lot.
It hit with a surprisingly cartoonish smack...
Getting our shoes soaking wet.
I like to think that brother angel was giggling with us. Once again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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August 13, 2024 at 9:33 PM
Could be- :)
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