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Black Void Prey

The spirit of memories polluted fingerprints crossing over your spine Ghouls that crawl eerily creeping from an abyss of the darkest claws scratching Consuming with fire aching burns scaled by nightmares of the past demons From under tombstones they rise cold echoes undead souls of bygone nightshades haunt

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Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/14/2017 10:05:00 AM

Dear Liam: A nice touch of the eerie. Enjoyed. Leon

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/9/2017 12:56:00 PM

Very haunting, dear. I get an eerie feeling reading these words. Great dark write.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/9/2017 11:51:00 AM

Great title Liam, deep and dark...

Donna Loughman

Date: 11/9/2017 10:29:00 AM

Liam, this reminds me of the feeling you get when someone crosses over your spirit! Excellent imagery....:-)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/9/2017 9:56:00 AM

Hi Liam! :))Wow!This is an outstanding but kind of very scary n' creepy poem that you've painted here my dearest friend Liam.Excellent piece!So very dark but very beautifully written:)Great imagery!Just awesome!Your pen is mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot that you and yours are okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^