Maria Fernandez-Garcia Poet Free verse

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Black Swan

              Lovely white angels
      whispered next to my pillow
in my sleep that I was the black swan.
             My pillow as a stage,
  I was dancing as a prima ballerina. 
         You took me for a while,
         I had you for a moment.
           Both together dancing
            forever on my pillow
    to have the best performance.

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Ink Empress December 7, 2023 at 9:31 AM Oh this gives so many various emotions, and the descriptive imagery emanates a euphoric vibe. I love the way you’ve written this. And i think black swans are gorgeous. And the ballerina dance with pillow as a stage depicts so many dreams within. Mellifluous and moving. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 7, 2023 at 10:31 AM Thank you for stopping by and leaving your kind message. I'm glad you liked it. Blessingsxxx

Beryl Edmonds December 5, 2023 at 6:32 PM A beautiful black swan you were on the pillow you danced on. A lovely dream and a lovely poem Maria… Belle Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 6, 2023 at 1:58 AM Good morning Belle. Thank you so much for stopping by and your kind words. Have a great day!

Yann Rolland December 5, 2023 at 6:03 PM so lovely poem, .i really don't know about the metaphor of the black swan, the poem is perfect, thanks Maria Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 6, 2023 at 1:56 AM Hello Yann. Thank you for your comment. Have a nice day my frienxxx

Bill Baker December 5, 2023 at 5:13 PM Lovely dream, Maria, and fine poetry. Our aunt and Uncle both danced for the New York Metropolitan Ballet for years before forming the Dallas Metropolitan Ballet Company. She was the prima ballerina. Sara and I enjoy going to their performances. Lovely subject for a poem, my friend. Have a pleasant day! Bill Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 5, 2023 at 5:28 PM That s nice to know. I ve been in ballet too. How nice surprise. I really appreciate your comment Bill. My friendxxxx