Black Sun Version I

Black Sun’s crypt sands,
feeling infernal crimson winds 
ancient galleon sail
Across a brutal bloody land.
Setting on Jagged black
Shores casting far into golden 
Halo’s, burning the horizon cold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ntr Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 4:50 PM
I really enjoy the imagery and tone of this poem, it was really dope. Amazing Job!
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November 27, 2021 at 6:39 PM
Thanks for the kind words! Much appreciated!
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