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Black Soul

Be mine, Always need me, Turn my world upside down, Please save my immortality, For my heart's fractures makes my soul turn black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/16/2015 5:39:00 PM
Very interesting verse, Laura. I very much enjoyed it! The broken need for another soul can turn the soul black as coal. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/16/2015 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Laura for your kind words! Much appreciated. Be blessed-Laura

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