Black Soul

Be mine,
Always need me,
Turn my world upside down,
Please save my immortality,
For my heart's fractures makes my soul turn black.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Very interesting verse, Laura. I very much enjoyed it! The broken need for another soul can turn the soul black as coal. Always, Laura
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October 16, 2015 at 10:05 PM
Thank you Laura for your kind words! Much appreciated. Be blessed-Laura
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