Black Powder

soldier placed powder ready to ignite cannon..... bald is beautiful
penned 6 November 2018 contest black powder..Anthony Slausen
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Allison Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 1:24 PM
I found the final line is open to several interpreatations Seren... good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Bangalee Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 5:02 AM
cannon comes to devastate mosquito ! // nice senryu
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