Black Orchid

I drank bottles
of potent optimism,
trampling impatiens 
in the garden bed.

In love's labyrinth
I stumbled in the hedges,
emerging to disengorge
in a plaster fountain
under a starless sky.

I awoke a sloth
in morning's garish chasm,
the silent telephone blooming
like a black orchid.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:39 AM
Wow, such a lovely poem. It is fantastic!! -JWE
Gentry Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Lovely poem, Dale. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Cozart Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you, Line.
Man Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:35 PM
I feel your pain. Your pen paints a brilliant but oh so sad picture!!
Cozart Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thanks very much, LM!
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:38 PM
I agree with Agnes. Such creative images. Stunningly so!!
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Krampe Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:05 PM
These are creative images, Dale. Love it.
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Adams Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Wow! You definitely have a way with words my friend. I kind of feel like I need to scrub in the shower, for some reason!.........80)
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Thank you very much, Pat.
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:04 PM
A lovely and artistic lost love lament, Dale. Beautiful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Thanks much, Susan.
Allison Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Dale your free verse is exceptional, love the imagery in this sad sad poem and I especially like that final stanza. I had a black orchid once - would love another one:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Thank you, Jan, very much.
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