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Black Orchid

I drank bottles of potent optimism, trampling impatiens in the garden bed. In love's labyrinth I stumbled in the hedges, emerging to disengorge in a plaster fountain under a starless sky. I awoke a sloth in morning's garish chasm, the silent telephone blooming like a black orchid.

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Date: 8/17/2018 4:39:00 AM
Wow, such a lovely poem. It is fantastic!! -JWE
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Date: 8/15/2018 4:04:00 PM
Lovely poem, Dale. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/15/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 8/12/2018 12:35:00 PM
I feel your pain. Your pen paints a brilliant but oh so sad picture!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/12/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thanks very much, LM!
Date: 8/11/2018 6:38:00 PM
I agree with Agnes. Such creative images. Stunningly so!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/11/2018 7:27:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 8/11/2018 6:05:00 PM
These are creative images, Dale. Love it.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/11/2018 6:05:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes!
Date: 8/11/2018 5:30:00 PM
Wow! You definitely have a way with words my friend. I kind of feel like I need to scrub in the shower, for some reason!.........80)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/11/2018 6:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Pat.
Date: 8/11/2018 5:04:00 PM
A lovely and artistic lost love lament, Dale. Beautiful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/11/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thanks much, Susan.
Date: 8/11/2018 4:20:00 PM
Dale your free verse is exceptional, love the imagery in this sad sad poem and I especially like that final stanza. I had a black orchid once - would love another one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/11/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, very much.

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