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Black Mouse Invasion

You invade my house. You invade my life. You invade my dreams. Am I seeing things? Or is it a black mouse invasion. I get chills from just seeing your wee head peak out. As you scurry away so fast from where you have been hiding. Am I seeing things? Or is it a black mouse invasion. As you climb over everything in sight. Your slender wee body slinging and weaving about. Am I seeing things? Or is it a black mouse invasion. You move so fast, blink and your gone. By Jacqueline King (Sunday 8th October 2023) (C)

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Date: 10/16/2023 8:25:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about mice through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/13/2023 7:14:00 PM
Have ran into this same situation. Very good
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