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Black Love

He is the skin that covers my wounds The air that surrounds the moon I am his star He is my night He is the darkness on my plantains That makes them so ripe and sweet He is my eyes reflection In the night when I sleep He is the keys on my keyboard That I love to stroke He is the dots on my watch And I am the hand that’s on top of him every second and Every hour in existence I am his lighter And he is my incense He is the words on my page That cannot be erased And gets wiser with age He is my BET And my cup of tea That I drink As I sit here and think About him whispering dirty little secrets In my ear Undressing my imagination Arousing the sensations Flowing through my veins Causing the sensory nerves in my brain To overload and explode Into mental fragments of Black love

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Date: 6/13/2014 11:03:00 AM
There is so much richness in the last 7 lines of this poem. I can't count the multiplicity of images that I take from them. This is your forte, my dear. You know how to pack a composition with meaning. I find it worth my while to pick out the gems and let them grow. That is really what poetry is about, isn't it?
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Date: 6/6/2014 3:12:00 PM
Thi is no beautiful and cleverly articulated. Great write - love it! Kindest regards.
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
I appreciate you taking the time to read it. Thank you!
Date: 6/5/2014 9:00:00 AM
I enjoyed the flow of this poem and how you expressed yourself...He's one lucky guy..INK-U-SCRIPT
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Latosha Mitchell
Date: 6/7/2014 7:34:00 AM
Thank you for reading. He is one lucky guy, if I do say so myself, LOL.

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