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Black Lotus

black lotus thrives upon mirrored pond... delicate beauty ~*~

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James Fraser

Date: 4/17/2011 1:48:00 PM

Wonderful shot your camera eye has captured Annalise. Fine Haiku if I may say so....:)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/25/2011 10:32:00 AM

pictured that scene very well, Annalise. The color mirror and delicate worked the wonders in this one. Very nice. aNd oh yeah... I outlived my money a long long time ago! :) thankis for your comments

Steven Mossburg

Date: 2/23/2011 3:12:00 AM

This poem is a "delicate beauty" just like the lotus. a joy to read

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2011 2:11:00 AM

Nice imagery here!Cute Haiku.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/22/2011 11:49:00 AM

Sweetie, I like the haiku modern forms and the image you painted is much like the one I just read in Gert's poem. I have never seen a black lotus, but now I feel as they I've seen a painting of one. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/22/2011 4:54:00 AM

Great picture and don't worry that this Haiku won't follow the 5-7-5 format. You#ve penned a nice contrast in this one, Annalise. I also wrote one about a lotus flower. Will post it soon on PoetrySoup....All the best!...Gert

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/21/2011 5:51:00 PM

You did not stick to the 5 7 5 format. However, I like this short poem. There is a marvelous pond in the Brooklyn Botanical Gardens with flowers in it and goldfish. I look foward to seeing it again next spring. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

John Rhinem

Date: 2/21/2011 4:00:00 PM

Smile ~ Either or my dear, "Your Beauty," has thus brushed yet another "Jewelistic Masterpiece In Beauty; 'Kudos of Sweeet' &, Yes, 'A Fave.'" ~ Also, "Thank You," for blessing my humble self with "Your Radiances" lovely com; cinnamon for the Soul ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John! ~ Smile, "Stay As Lovely As 'Your Beauties' Black Lotus Lily My Dear Amid, 'The Pond of Beautiful Love;'" Bye Precious Annalise!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 2/21/2011 3:49:00 PM

Smile ~ "Beautiful Debra's" com made myself self smile "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Beautiful Annalise Brigham!!!'" ~ And, amid regards unto this somewhat fascinating painting of a poe ~ Yes, the black lotus; I would say perhaps with a touch of pinkish trim adorning its beauty added unto the possible sereneness of its soothing sedative nature perhaps ~ Cont:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2011 5:54:00 AM

Beautiful visual picture of black lotus, a very rare thing with good images, Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2011 5:00:00 AM

hey there poet friend try to give some emotion in line 3, bring in a sensory memory...Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/21/2011 4:59:00 AM

dreamy, dreamy with expressions that glow, anna! dazzling 'ku! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/21/2011 3:37:00 AM

Quite a beautiful image Annalise, love ya Wilma :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2011 11:41:00 PM

Beautiful one. I am glad to have caught this finally just going off for the night!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/20/2011 11:38:00 PM

I can just imagine that flower and its reflection on the pond's surface. You have written this haiku well.