Black Lace

Fingertip tracery on black lace.
The exploration of excitation.
Upon an all too…open face.

Fingertip tracery on black lace
Swollen, pulsing, damp, full;
The exploration of sensation.
Upturned hips, caste and pull…

Fingertip tracery on black lace
Curls moist with passion escape.
Thrust, grasp, reach, sigh…
The exploration of penetration.
The downward plunge, thigh to thigh.

Fingertip tracery ‘pon silken space
Parted pout, pristine place.
Pelvic motion, passion, embraced.
Throb, strum, pinch, and tap…
Exploration of exaltation.

In a lovers lap.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank Herrera's "Fondest Memory" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 5:54 AM
And not one naughty word and so no one can say they can't write about anything they please and do it tastefully ;) Thanks Everyone!
Johnson Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 11:09 PM
Congratulations Deorah. A worthy win indeed. Love, Joyce
K. Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 10:46 PM
!!!! ok let me borrow your WOWsers, Debbie!! what a sizzling piece you have here-- "fingertip tracery"-- wow--- super congrats on your win with this hottie ;) -- hugs to you --nikko :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 10:20 PM
how you weave your tender images and thoughts to create a magical tapestry of a poem amazes me, debbie.. a gem of glittering of beaded wordings… kudos for a well-deserved win!! masterful piece.. nette
Mannan Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Awesome poetry at its best Debbie. Many congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:38 PM
VERY Steamy writing here, Deb. Frank had told me how much he loved the one about black lace and finally I am seeing it!! A big congratulations to you, my friend. LUv, Andrea
Horsman Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:10 PM
Wow wish it was my lap, Deb this is wonderful, such profoundness in every word. Congrats. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 7:21 PM
So passionate, Deb. Congrats on your win!
Richards Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 7:17 PM
Wahoo....whew!! Your fondest memory is one many will envy!! :) Congratulations dear Debbie on this fabulous, and scalding win!!! Happy Holidays!! love Carrie
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved third place win in the contest of frank, Deb
Sweetheart Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in the Fondest Memories contest with this superb write and entry TEACH... enjoy another top spot win for a well written piece with luv..
Thekidster Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 4:06 PM
After reading this write to no surprise I began to feel my elevator rise. One Hot Little Write. Let me tell ya, with writes like this who needs Viagra! Damnit! Now I can't sit comfortably. Look what you've done to me Deborah Guzzi! *TheKidsterWasHere*
Cheeseman Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Read it and off for a cold shower , great poem , true feelings so well put on paper Thanks Daniel
Reynolds Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Found it! Ee-gads, I remember this now - very very very hot stuff, Deborah! My computer is smoking, too! lol Check your soup mail! love, Kristin
Ehigiator Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 10:17 PM
Wow, that was....WOW!! I am at a lost for words, very intimate, Great write..*Tyesha
Richards Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 5:27 PM
This one was worth checking out....if only for the laughs I got from Vince's comment!! LOL!~Carrie
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Hey! Cut that out. Damn computer. Smoke coming out of the back. Have a great day. Vince
Fawcett Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 8:57 AM
Oolalah! There is a lot of hot passion around today! Must have something to do with the New Year. Beautifully and tastefully written sensual poetry. Loved it. Love, Nigel
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