Black Lace

Fingertip tracery on black lace.
The exploration of excitation.
Upon an all too…open face.

Fingertip tracery on black lace
Swollen, pulsing, damp, full;
The exploration of sensation.
Upturned hips, caste and pull…

Fingertip tracery on black lace
Curls moist with passion escape.
Thrust, grasp, reach, sigh…
The exploration of penetration.
The downward plunge, thigh to thigh.

Fingertip tracery ‘pon silken space
Parted pout, pristine place.
Pelvic motion, passion, embraced.
Throb, strum, pinch, and tap…
Exploration of exaltation.

In a lovers lap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/28/2010 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank Herrera's "Fondest Memory" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2010 5:54:00 AM
And not one naughty word and so no one can say they can't write about anything they please and do it tastefully ;) Thanks Everyone!
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Date: 12/20/2010 11:09:00 PM
Congratulations Deorah. A worthy win indeed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:46:00 PM
!!!! ok let me borrow your WOWsers, Debbie!! what a sizzling piece you have here-- "fingertip tracery"-- wow--- super congrats on your win with this hottie ;) -- hugs to you --nikko :)
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:20:00 PM
how you weave your tender images and thoughts to create a magical tapestry of a poem amazes me, debbie.. a gem of glittering of beaded wordings… kudos for a well-deserved win!! masterful piece.. nette
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:42:00 PM
Awesome poetry at its best Debbie. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:38:00 PM
VERY Steamy writing here, Deb. Frank had told me how much he loved the one about black lace and finally I am seeing it!! A big congratulations to you, my friend. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:10:00 PM
Wow wish it was my lap, Deb this is wonderful, such profoundness in every word. Congrats. Harry
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:21:00 PM
So passionate, Deb. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:17:00 PM
Wahoo....whew!! Your fondest memory is one many will envy!! :) Congratulations dear Debbie on this fabulous, and scalding win!!! Happy Holidays!! love Carrie
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved third place win in the contest of frank, Deb
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:48:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in the Fondest Memories contest with this superb write and entry TEACH... enjoy another top spot win for a well written piece with luv..
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:06:00 PM
After reading this write to no surprise I began to feel my elevator rise. One Hot Little Write. Let me tell ya, with writes like this who needs Viagra! Damnit! Now I can't sit comfortably. Look what you've done to me Deborah Guzzi! *TheKidsterWasHere*
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Date: 2/8/2010 2:59:00 AM
Read it and off for a cold shower , great poem , true feelings so well put on paper Thanks Daniel
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Date: 2/13/2009 7:19:00 AM
Found it! Ee-gads, I remember this now - very very very hot stuff, Deborah! My computer is smoking, too! lol Check your soup mail! love, Kristin
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Date: 1/4/2009 10:17:00 PM
Wow, that was....WOW!! I am at a lost for words, very intimate, Great write..*Tyesha
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Date: 1/3/2009 5:27:00 PM
This one was worth checking out....if only for the laughs I got from Vince's comment!! LOL!~Carrie
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Date: 1/3/2009 10:18:00 AM
Hey! Cut that out. Damn computer. Smoke coming out of the back. Have a great day. Vince
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Date: 1/3/2009 8:57:00 AM
Oolalah! There is a lot of hot passion around today! Must have something to do with the New Year. Beautifully and tastefully written sensual poetry. Loved it. Love, Nigel
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